The account of why force was used, read back to you FORCE
Nobody disputes the test. What goes wrong is the writing: a conclusion where a description should be, an event with nobody in it, a fact that arrived afterwards, and half the trade's vocabulary heard as a euphemism.
Whose account, and about what
The account, in the order it is judged in
Write in your own words. What appears under each box is what a reader marked, and every mark can be ignored: this is a reader, not an editor, and an account in somebody else’s words is not your account.
What is not in it at all
Six things are looked for across the whole account rather than in any one paragraph, because the warning may well be in the paragraph about what you saw.
Each force option, with the four facts
Every option needs the same things recorded against it: what, when, how many times, and what it did. The last one is the one left out.
The account with the marks on it
How it works
FORCE reads back a written account of why force was used and flags the writing problems that undermine it: a conclusion where a description should be, a passive sentence with nobody doing anything, labels like aggressive instead of what the person did, and hindsight. It does not rewrite your account; it shows where it is weak so you can fix it. The text stays in this tab.
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